The Manuscript X-Ray

Structure, voice, tension, pacing—if it’s broken, I’ll find it and tell you how to fix it. This is not a coddle session. This is an X-ray for your manuscript's bones. Whether it's your screenplay, novel or short story collection, if something feels off in your pages and you can’t tell what, I will. With my critical precision and 8+ years as an editor, I’ll diagnose the major issues and prescribe a practical plan of attack for your next draft. Because I don't just have the sharp eyes of an editor, I've also got the storytelling chops of someone who’s actually written a book (and pitched it. And rewritten it. And cried over it. You know the drill.) You get: A read-through of up to 300 pages A detailed editorial audio note on structure, pacing, voice, and character My signature “Fix This First” PDF so you stop tinkering and start transforming